Initial Footage

I filmed a segment of my production with the Main Actor, Conor within school. After looking at this footage I have decided that some of it is workable, however a few of the shot have continuity errors within if they were edited into a sequence, a few also contain a few lighting errors where by the camera has automatically adjusted to the difference in light.

The footage is below:

As you can see some of the shots are limited, including a fellow student disturbing the continuity of the shots, therefore I have pointed them out below:

Student continuity error

This is from within the locker of Conor, taking his things out to connote him leaving the premises, however, half way through this scene a student from Brooke Weston, enters the frame, this disturbs the continuity with the next shot as it is filmed where the student is standing making the switch between the two shot impossible. Therefore, a re-film is required.
Also in the shot the camera blooms to the change in light, this is very noticeable and therefore this will need to be adjusted in the camera to ensure this doesn't happen.

A few of the other shots required re-filming, this is because I feel they are a a bit basic and could be improved by giving the camera movement. Therefore, I would like to use the Camera Dolly I made to provide me with these shots.